The Traitor’s Heart Sample

Chapter 1

April 28, 1746

The mist clung to the hills above Glen Mor like smoke from a dying fire, thick enough to muffle hoofbeats and mask the movement of men who had business in the shadows. Kieran MacLennan pulled his gelding to a halt on the narrow deer track and listened to the silence that wasn’t quite silence—the whisper of wind through heather, the distant bleat of sheep, and something else that made the hair on his neck prickle.

“Hold,” he murmured, raising his hand. Behind him, Ty MacNeil and the others reined in without question, their mounts’ breath steaming in the cold air.

Kieran’s finger tapped against his thigh as he weighed the reports from the village. A lad moving through the hills with too much purpose. Eyes where they shouldn’t be. Questions asked with the careful phrasing of someone mapping exits and counting guards. The kind of reconnaissance that preceded either theft or something far worse.

Ty eased his horse forward until their stirrups nearly touched. “Naught but deer sign on the eastern slope,” he reported, voice pitched low. “But Rabbie found boot prints by the burn—fresh, heading toward the old drove road.”

“How many?”

“One, near as we can tell. Light step, moving careful-like.”

Kieran rubbed his chin, feeling the scratch of day-old stubble against his palm. A single scout meant either desperation or confidence. In these times, both could be equally dangerous.

“We’ll take him quiet,” Kieran decided. “No noise to draw the English patrols.”

The words left a bitter taste in his mouth—English patrols that he supposedly welcomed, that he’d invited onto MacLennan lands with smiles and assurances of loyalty to King George. The deception sat in his chest like a stone, but it kept his people alive and the evacuation routes open. Some prices had to be paid.

They spread out in the practiced silence of men who’d hunted together for years, picking their way through the bracken and gorse. The mist helped, but it cut both ways—their quarry would have the same advantage. Kieran kept his breathing steady and his movements deliberate, every sense straining for the telltale snap of a twig or the scrape of leather against stone.

A shadow moved among the birch trees ahead.

Kieran’s pulse quickened, but he didn’t change his pace. The figure crouched behind a fallen log, perfectly still except for the subtle shift of shoulders that meant he was watching the approaches to Glen Mor with the patience of someone trained to observe and remember. Not a thief, then. A scout.

The lad—for he looked young from what Kieran could see—wore rough Highland dress that had seen hard use, his plaid wrapped tight against the cold. Dark hair caught the fading light where it escaped his bonnet, and when he moved to check the path behind him, Kieran caught a glimpse of a face that was all sharp angles and watchful intelligence.

Kieran signaled Ty with a gesture that meant ‘circle wide’ and pointed Rabbie toward the eastern approach. The scout’s attention stayed fixed on the valley below. He was good—his positioning gave him clear sightlines while keeping his back to cover, and he’d chosen ground that offered multiple escape routes.

Too bad for him that Kieran knew these hills better than his own heartbeat.

The attack came swift and silent. Kieran closed the distance in three long strides while Ty moved to cut off the eastern escape route. The scout’s head snapped up at the last second, eyes going wide as he rolled sideways and came up with a dirk in his hand.

Fast. Trained. And absolutely terrified.

“Easy, lad.” Kieran kept his sword low but ready, aware of Rabbie moving to flank from the west. “Nobody needs to die today.”

The scout’s gaze flicked between them with the quick assessment of someone who’d learned to fight for his life. When he moved, it was with the desperate efficiency of a cornered animal—not toward any of the men, but straight for the gap between them that led to the steepest part of the slope.

Kieran lunged forward, catching the scout’s wrist as the dirk came up. The blade was good steel, well-maintained, with something carved into the hilt that he couldn’t make out in the dying light. They went down hard, rolling in the damp earth and bracken while the scout fought like a wildcat, all elbows and knees and fury.

“Hold still, ye daft—” Kieran’s curse cut off as the scout’s heel caught him in the ribs, driving the breath from his lungs. The lad was smaller than him by a considerable margin, but he knew how to use leverage and dirty tactics that spoke of desperate experience.

Kieran finally pinned him facedown in the heather, one hand twisted behind his back and Kieran’s knee pressed between his shoulder blades. The scout went still except for the harsh rasp of his breathing, and Kieran became aware of things that didn’t quite fit—the way the lad’s shoulders curved, the narrow span of his waist, the complete lack of the beard that should have been sprouting at his age.

Something was off. He couldn’t name what, but the feeling nagged at him like a splinter under the skin.

“Well now.” Kieran kept his voice steady while his mind raced. “That was more trouble than I expected from a wee scout.”

The dirk lay where it had fallen, and Ty picked it up with careful hands. In the fading light, Kieran caught sight of the pommel—carved with a seal that made his blood run cold. Three mountains. The Mackenzie arms.

His finger tapped against his knee. A Mackenzie dirk could mean anything—stolen from a corpse at Culloden or inherited from a fallen kinsman. The old earl had been dead these six years, his line scattered or underground, his estates forfeit to the Crown. But symbols had power, and this one had enough weight to hang a man if the English found it.

“Search him,” Kieran ordered, though he kept his knee planted firmly between the scout’s shoulders.

Ty’s hands moved with professional efficiency, checking for hidden weapons or papers that might reveal who’d sent him. Nothing but the basics—a small eating knife, a leather pouch with a few coins, and a piece of oiled cloth wrapped around something that crackled when Ty touched it.

“Letters?” Kieran asked.

“Nae. Looks like…” Ty unwrapped the cloth carefully. “Maps, maybe. Or notes.”

Before Kieran could examine them properly, the sound he’d been dreading drifted up from the valley below—English voices, sharp with authority, and the jingle of cavalry harness. A patrol, moving up the drove road with the confidence of men who owned the ground they rode on.

Kieran’s mind went blank for a heartbeat, then snapped into the kind of cold calculation that had kept him alive through Culloden and the months that followed. If the English found them here with a Jacobite scout, questions would follow that he couldn’t afford to answer. His careful balance between loyalty and survival would crumble, and with it the lives of everyone depending on the evacuation routes he protected.

But if he handed the scout over, the lad would hang before morning. No trial, no questions beyond what the English thought they needed to know. They’d found their sport, and they’d make it last long enough to send a message to anyone else thinking of skulking around Highland glens with Jacobite steel.

His finger drummed against his thigh. The scout’s breathing had gone shallow with fear, but he hadn’t begged or bargained. Whatever had brought him to these hills, he was prepared to die for it.

Kieran made his choice.

“Bind him,” he told Ty quietly. “We’re taking him home.”

Ty’s eyebrows rose, but he didn’t question the order. Years of following Kieran through impossible situations had taught him to trust his laird’s judgment, even when it seemed to fly in the face of reason. Rabbie produced a length of rope from his saddlebags, and within moments they had the scout’s hands secured behind his back.

The English voices were getting closer. Kieran hauled the scout to his feet and was startled again by how light he felt—all lean muscle and sharp bones, like someone who’d been living on too little food for too long. Up close, the lad’s face was pale beneath the dirt, but his eyes held a fury that burned steady as forge-fire.

“Listen well,” Kieran murmured, his voice pitched for the scout’s ears alone. “Keep yer mouth shut and ye might live to see morning. Speak out of turn, and I’ll hand ye over to the English myself. Do we understand each other?”

The scout’s jaw tightened, but he gave a sharp nod.

Kieran lifted him onto his horse with hands that were steadier than his heartbeat, settling him across the saddle like a sack of grain. Not dignified, but it would have to serve. The mist was thickening with the approach of full dark, and if they moved quickly, they could be away before the English patrol climbed high enough to spot them.

“Ride quiet,” he ordered, swinging up behind the scout. “And pray the mist holds.”

They picked their way down the hillside in single file, horses stepping careful on ground made treacherous by moisture and shadow. Kieran kept one hand on the reins and the other resting lightly on the scout’s shoulder—not restraining, exactly, but making it clear that any attempt to bolt would be both noticed and prevented.

The lad sat tense as a bowstring, his attention fixed on every sound from the valley below. Smart enough to know how close he’d come to a English rope, and smart enough to realize that his current situation might not be much better. Kieran found himself oddly impressed by the stubborn line of the scout’s shoulders, the way he held his fear in check without letting it break his spirit.

The English voices faded behind them as they reached the main track that led toward MacLennan Keep. Here the going was easier, but Kieran didn’t let himself relax. Too many things could still go wrong—a chance encounter with another patrol, a recognition that connected the scout to something larger and more dangerous than simple reconnaissance.

“What’s yer name, lad?” he asked quietly.

The scout’s shoulders tensed further, but he didn’t answer.

“Not talking? Fair enough.” Kieran adjusted his grip as his horse picked up the pace. “But ye’ll have to speak eventually. Better to start with something easy.”

Still nothing. Kieran rubbed his chin with his free hand and felt the scout flinch at the movement. Afraid, then, but holding it together through sheer will. The kind of control that came from experience with capture, or at least with situations where showing weakness meant death.

The keep’s lights appeared through the mist like stars fallen to earth, warm and welcoming after the cold uncertainty of the hills. Kieran felt some of the tension ease from his shoulders as they approached the gates, though he knew the real challenge was just beginning. He had a Jacobite scout with a Mackenzie dirk sitting bound before him, English patrols on his lands, and no clear idea of what the lad had been looking for.

But he was alive, and so was his prisoner. For now, that would have to be enough.

The guards called out the challenge as they approached, and Kieran answered with the night’s password. The gates swung open, revealing the familiar courtyard with its warm glow of torches and the comforting bustle of evening activity. Home, or as close to it as he could manage in times like these.

“Take him to the south tower,” Kieran told Ty as he dismounted. “The room with the good lock and no windows. Post a guard, but keep it quiet. I dinnae want the whole keep talking about our guest before I’ve had a chance to question him properly.”

Ty nodded and moved to help the scout down from the horse. The lad stumbled when his feet hit the cobblestones but caught himself quickly, that fierce pride refusing to let him show weakness even in captivity. Kieran watched him straighten his shoulders and lift his chin, preparing to face whatever came next with the same stubborn courage he’d shown on the hillside.

“One more thing,” Kieran called softly, and the scout’s head turned toward him. In the torchlight, his eyes were dark as winter water, shadowed with exhaustion but still blazing with defiance. “Ye fought well up there. That counts for something.”

The scout’s expression didn’t change, but something flickered behind those dark eyes—surprise, maybe, or the first crack in his armor of distrust. Then Ty was leading him away toward the keep, and Kieran was left standing in the courtyard with a dirk that bore the seal of a dead earl and questions whose answers could possibly get them all killed.

He rubbed his chin again. Another burden to carry, another life to protect, and another choice that might damn them all.